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Offline angel_skye

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Remember Me--- please comment
« on: August 27, 2002, 11:00:55 pm »
Daddy, I love you!
Where have you gone?
I can't see you.
I hear your voice,
yet I do not see you.
I'm floating over my body.
What's happening to me?
Why is mommy crying,
I see the family so sad.
What happened on that sad night?
I see a great, bright light.
Should I go?
Should I cross the larde gate?
The voice I hear tells me your will be fine.
That I will see you from there. I asked
"Where am I?", he told me heaven. I can
sit and wait under the pretty trees, sell the sweet aroma of the roses, and wait for you to come with me.
Please always remember me, and that I will always love you. Even if I am no longer there next to you.

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Re: Remember Me--- please comment
« Reply #1 on: August 27, 2002, 11:07:37 pm »
ah, stop it, you gave me chills.
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Re: Remember Me--- please comment
« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2003, 02:27:22 pm »
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ah, stop it, you gave me chills.

Thats great  [smiley=curtain.gif]
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Re: Remember Me--- please comment
« Reply #3 on: January 27, 2003, 12:45:25 pm »
Alot of poetry going on in this site ............kinda Cool.


'' That is Poetry Mal '' [smiley=2gunsfiring_v1.gif]
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« Reply #4 on: March 14, 2003, 05:24:05 pm »
That was great. Full of emotion, very visual.

You did a good job with this piece.  :)
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