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confusion from within
« on: August 23, 2002, 01:55:21 pm »
                   "Confusion From Within"

There's a creature inside me,
evil and dark.
helongs to break free,
he burns like a spank.

He dresses in black,
there's anger in store,
he never looks back,
he makes me sore.

I feel afraid
of this one inside.
I wish to run away,
I want to hide.

But he calls to me.
He draws me in.
I'll never be free
I drink of him.

His eyes are pools
of darkness to me.
I play the fool,
of this I see.

He causes me strain,
but yet this treasure,
erases the pain,
and gives me pleasure.

His lips upon mine
taste sickly sweet.
Similar to wine,
which is not a drink, but meat.

He is of the night,
this creature of strife.
he tries with all his might
to steal away my life.

Yet I want him...
I swear...
to obey his whim,
of this I dare.

I cherish the moments,
the darkness this night.
I await the time;
he takes away my might.

I bow down to his will
and, yet,
he still
can make me forget:

His darkness,
wickedness,
evilness
that cause me distress.

There's a creature inside me,
dark and black,
he longs for me
and I long for him back.
« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 09:00:00 pm by 1064646000 »

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Re: confusion from within
« Reply #1 on: August 26, 2002, 10:58:44 pm »
woah, i really like this one.


makes me think of vampires!
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Re: confusion from within
« Reply #2 on: January 24, 2003, 02:40:55 pm »


What might this creature be
For a have seen a set of eyes which looked back from with in
but i wonder...
is this my creature looking to get loose
is this myself looking for an outlet
is this something else darker.

A crature of the dark.
Today it spoke to me an my way home,
" Why you wonder about me when you know who I'm.
For you know what I'm,
you might be able to fool every one but I know you and
seen you..."

And as I walk I wonder is this true,
Am I this creature ...
who in the dark lives
who life is no more that to...


For every one has a creature with in..
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Re: confusion from within
« Reply #3 on: July 29, 2003, 07:58:02 am »
Agree with Sal. LOVE IT! :D
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