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Offline gb_cmt

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Like on Old Toy
« on: January 28, 2003, 09:11:07 am »
One day, that day,
the day that I'll never forget.
I was like a new toy placed on the window,
just looking for someone,
someone to make me feel loved
and to give love to,and so you came..

Looking at your eyes
I felt loved and comfort,
I felt like we were meant to be,
and so you took me home
and you made me feel wanted, needed "loved"...

One day, that day,
the day that I will never forget.
You came play with me for the last time...
I heard you smile
and it made me feel like a new toy
but suddenly you looked at me
and with a smile said," Thank you ",
and you put me away.


« Last Edit: December 31, 1969, 09:00:01 pm by -1 »

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Re:  Like on Old Toy
« Reply #1 on: January 28, 2003, 10:05:35 am »
That is poetry .  Very good .  I liked it. ;D
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Re:  Like on Old Toy
« Reply #2 on: July 29, 2003, 08:04:01 am »
Pretty cool. It makes me feel sad in some parts.  :-[
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Re:  Like on Old Toy
« Reply #3 on: September 14, 2003, 04:23:00 pm »
It's  nice to see people still come to read what i write
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Re:  Like on Old Toy
« Reply #4 on: September 15, 2003, 07:22:43 am »
glad to see you came back!
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