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Title: Hmmmm....
Post by: stacy on August 17, 2002, 09:12:38 am

This one was written at a time that I was really happy. LOL!!!  ;D  What do ya'll think?

                            "A Grave Mistake?"

I'm standing here
wondering why
am I here
I don't know why.

I feel I've made
a grave mistake
in coming here;
am I awake?

You arseure me
that I am
here for a reason
I don't understand.

I'm here for you
is what you say
but I am scared.
Should I run away?

My knees they quake
I can't stand still.
My body shakes
against my will.

You see the fear
my eyes reflect.
You draw me near
without regret.

I tremble then
as your hand reaches up.
My eyes close when
my face you "cup".

Your lips descend:
I nearly swoon.
To your touch I bend
anticipating what's coming soon.

Wandering hands
drop to my breasts.
I feel you are a man
as them you caress.

Lips follow hands
on the journey to the south.
More! my body demands
as I'm kissed by your mouth.

A moment later
our clothes are gone.
My body cannot wait
until we are one.

Your hands go lower,
your fingers explore.
My body bends over
as I drop to the floor.

Your hands they move
in and out.
With every touch
I want to shout.

Shout for joy,
scream with pleasure.
You've taught me, boy,
this moment I'll treasure.

Then your lips
descend to my secret zone.
Your tongue it flicks
and then I moan.

You lean back
and then pull near.
I feel you then,
I long for you dear.

You push in,
up inside of me.
How long has it been?
Why didn't I see?

How good it feels:
pure ecstacy!
I can't believe it's real,
that you're with me.

Then you came,
sweet release.
I'll never be the same,
thank you for this.

I'm glad I said yes,
I was not mistaken.
It was only a decision
that was given and taken.

Title: Re: Hmmmm....
Post by: Gary on August 17, 2002, 11:40:26 am

Very cool, like the whole "surrender" vibe you got goin there. Forgot how sexy the written word could be.

Well done

Title: Re: Hmmmm....
Post by: admin on August 17, 2002, 12:54:55 pm

yes, definiteley(sp?) one happy poem. ;D

Title: Re: Hmmmm....
Post by: filter_78745 on March 16, 2003, 03:19:51 am

I could tell you were very happy. :)

Nice imagery and detail. Very good.

Title: Re: Hmmmm....
Post by: Rob on March 17, 2003, 11:46:02 am

Well that got me pretty excited...........Glad im sitting down.

" Red Rover , Red Rover , let Robert come over "

Title: Re: Hmmmm....
Post by: gb_cmt on March 25, 2003, 10:22:11 am

PERTTY GOOD  ;)